evilrooster ([info]evilrooster) wrote,
@ 2008-04-18 16:44:00
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Current mood: clean of floor
Entry tags:firefly, pastiche, serenity, shakespeare

In the spirit of this, a few lines that may be familiar.

Capt: A dozen years have pass'd since this took place,
And all that time hath Parliament kept hid
The secret of this world, till River here
Unearth'd it from their minds.  They feared she knew.
And right they were to dread, since many more
Among the spinning worlds would know it too.
And someone has to speak for those now dead.
For divers reasons did you join my crew
But all have come together to this place.
I've in the past demanded much of you.
Today I ask yet more; perhaps for all.
For this I know, as I know anything:
That they will try again.  Another world
Will be the lab for this experiment.
Or maybe they will sweep this landscape clean
And in a year or ten attempt again.
They'll swing back like the needle to the north
To the belief that they can better men.
And I hold not to that.  Here from this grave
I will not run. I aim to misbehave.

- o0o -

Capt:
There's more to flight than buttons, albatross,
More to the pilot's role than charts and maps.
You know the foremost rule of flying?  Aye,
I know you do, since you know what I'll say
Before I part my lips.
Riv:                         I do, but yet
I like to hear you say it nonetheless.
Capt:  'Tis love.  Though you know all the math the 'verse
Contains, if in the sky you take a ship unloved
She'll shake you off as sure as worlds turn.
Love keeps her in the air when she should fall
And tells you that she hurts before she keens.
It makes her home.
Riv:                         The storm is getting worse.
Capt: We will endure a while, till it disperse.



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[info]tnh
2008-04-19 02:21 am UTC (link)
Such joy!

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[info]mrteufel
2008-04-19 02:48 am UTC (link)
Well done indeed.

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[info]sprrwhwk
2008-04-19 04:11 am UTC (link)
++!

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[info]madrobins
2008-04-19 05:18 am UTC (link)
Oh, so lovely. Thanks.

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(Anonymous)
2008-04-19 07:29 am UTC (link)
Among the many joys of this is that I can still hear Nathan Fillion, even through the iambic pentameter - it's amazing to watch you keep the character note perfect while making him wear those fancy Elizabethan duds.

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(no subject) - [info]emeraldsedai, 2008-04-21 01:04 am UTC
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[info]davidgoldfarb
2008-04-19 08:30 am UTC (link)
Lovely.

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[info]sajia
2008-04-19 03:19 pm UTC (link)
Best. Fanfic. Ever.

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[info]marydell
2008-04-19 03:37 pm UTC (link)
*applause*

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[info]casacorona
2008-04-19 04:07 pm UTC (link)
Zowie! Well done!

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[info]thymidinekinase
2008-04-19 07:46 pm UTC (link)
Nicely done. (Here via Making Light.)

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[info]sammywol
2008-04-19 09:21 pm UTC (link)
Here thanks to a pointer from [info]daftnewt to say Wow! Really well done. I am going to have to rewatch my Firefly now looking out for iambic pentameter because that is very recognizably Mal's voice there.

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[info]elidyce
2008-04-20 10:13 am UTC (link)
I heard my husband cry aloud in joy,
And call to me that I must see at once,
The greatest and most wond'rous Firefly piece,
Ever seen, by him found through Making Light.
I saw, I read, and like him found delight
In the poetry and beauty of the
Captain's newly metered words: I am awed.
Had I but a tenth part of such talent,
I should be overjoyed; since I do not,
I hope that my small offering may yet
Convey my admiration.

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[info]davidfrazer
2008-04-20 12:08 pm UTC (link)
Brilliant, thank you. I've taken the liberty of posting a story about this at Whedonesque.

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(no subject) - [info]evilrooster, 2008-04-21 06:43 pm UTC

[info]zooey_glass04
2008-04-20 12:35 pm UTC (link)
This is genius - absolutely note-perfect!

Bravo!

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[info]qui_ca
2008-04-20 01:40 pm UTC (link)
Brilliant!!

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[info]jessicamelusine
2008-04-20 01:44 pm UTC (link)
*applause*(here from Whedonesque)

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[info]tijnat
2008-04-20 01:58 pm UTC (link)
I'm here from Whedonesque, also. As an English major who loves Shakespeare, I can say that you have done a brilliant job and I agree that we can still hear Captain Mal's voice saying those words.

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[info]platysseus
2008-04-20 04:07 pm UTC (link)
I had to read it out loud, to get the full sense of it being like Shakespeare.

That was damn awesome! Totally pimping it out to other Firefly/Serenity fans. :)

*also here thanks to the link at Whedonesque*

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[info]ambisis
2008-04-20 04:37 pm UTC (link)
For combining Shakespeare and Firefly, my two favorite things, you get a MAJOR gold star.

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[info]annathepiper
2008-04-20 04:59 pm UTC (link)
A work of beauty. Well done! <3

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[info]selenite
2008-04-20 06:03 pm UTC (link)
Magnificent.

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[info]lightupmyroom
2008-04-20 07:11 pm UTC (link)
Wonderful!

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[info]okelay
2008-04-20 07:37 pm UTC (link)
this is awesome!

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[info]phyrelight
2008-04-20 07:40 pm UTC (link)
Lovely! I love Shakespeare and I love Serenity. A combination of the two is just shiny!

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[info]normaltrouble
2008-04-20 08:39 pm UTC (link)
Marvelous.

I come here via [info]xforge and will also recommend this post.

Thanks for the words and work!

Edited at 2008-04-20 08:48 pm UTC

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(no subject) - (Anonymous), 2008-04-22 10:56 am UTC

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